by CutMeOpen Jan 2, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
There was a little girl |
To be honest i dont like this one at all. uuh first of all it wasnt rly a poem second you rly rly rly forced everything. nothing flowed as a poem is suppose to and the ending dosent rly make alot of sense. im giving you a 2\5, i just didnt rly like this. the idea you had is wonderful, full of imagination but i just didnt rly like it. sry. |