by CutMeOpen Jan 3, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
You sit beside me in geomarty |
It is a cute poem but it sounds like you kind of forced it. uh the idea of it is wonderful but you have to bring more from the heart. get more from the heart more of how you really feel. but im going to give you a harsh 3\5. im rly sry but it sounded forced. you have to write it from the heart.put more feeling into it. |