Omg this was so sad, it truly struck a chord with me in the emotion category. This poem captured me and made me feel for you which was really powerful. I loved the rhyming, nothing seemed forced and everything flowed beautifully.

"She wants to here your voice"
^"hear" not "here"

Wonderfully done. *5/5*

I like this poem, beautifully written with a good choice of words, the sadness is strong in this poem, it really screams out in your words. The word flow is good to. I just had to keep reading. Well done.

It's a cute poem, but it was kind of hard to follow, there was no real topic about it, just kind of random, though if that's what you were going for then it's very good! If not, then maybe try to switch lines around to make it flow a little easier.

The poem is absolutely awesome...
i wonder why people are downrating...
seems unfair... it deserves a 10... =))
this is a really sad poem and a very emotional one...the write is amazing...
i wonder if the first stanza wouldn't look better if you split it in half (or more)...just for an easier read...
besides that very small point...
it is absolutely great...
*keep going*
isabel

Awwz wat a sad poem!!!
but very well written!! =D
4/5

<3 i love you silly

Oh... wow... im speechless... this is so sad... and beautiful... this really makes me think about my mom... is this true... 5/5