One Small Tear

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Jan 3, 2008


One small tear across your cheek
at loss of words but much to speak
broken bottles in the sink
falling there while you just shrink
cause shes still here
. and crystal clear

you still see her deep blue eyes
and the pain of her goodbyes
your hands are shaking, your fingers are cold
your eyes are wet and theres no one to hold

one small tear across your cheek
at loss of words but lots to speak
a vivid memory or endless dream
Two Cars Hit
. and you still hear her scream

as you lay there on the street
hand in hand
she turns to you
a one last breath
says goodbye
. and then she left

the other driver had too much to drink
now you add another bottle to the sink
but it is not a victim less crime
it took her away
. she could have been yours
. she could of been mine

Dedicated to anyone who's lost someone to drunk driving. It has to stop.

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Why have i not read any of these??

    this one is...actually, amazing. especially for an older poem from you jesse...because they get better...but those last two lines are haunting. and it's jst amazing...really. great.

    ((i hate how even when you weren't like you are now, you were amazing))

  • 16 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    Ok i know ive commented this one already..but i read it again forgetting that i had. and i just wanted to let u know I love it just as much and if not more than i did the first time!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    One word, -amazing!- It was great, the story, the rhyming, the flow... amazing. And the topic is just so true. Keeo up the great writing..and thanks for your comment=]

    -That Girl

    AKA Court

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Wow, such a power ful poem and makes u feel so many emotions on a very seirous topic. keep it up! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by mikaella

    WOW this was touching.....i mean truly amazing it made me want to cry ilove it your going on my favorites you should comment my poems

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