What a sad story you have put to verse Aaron. There are so many dying children in this world. Good job on telling this.
Take Care Cindy

Hi Aaron,

What a beautiful poem. There is so much beauty in sadness.
good job on this one.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

A very sad but enjoyable read. The image of a father doing all he can for his dying daughter was painted very well and left this reader feeling tremendously sad.. a fantastic write.