by Teria Jan 3, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I Know Him So Well. |
This is a very sad poem. alot of emotions was put into this i can tell. ur poems have so much potential. dont let no1 tell u different |
by Void
Oh. I loved the idea behind this one. It inspired me to do something for/about my own situation. Which is great. That is, if nothing else, what you want to give your readers. However, there are a few things I could nitpick about - so long as you don't mind harsh criticism. Feel free to ignore my words as well, being that they are only (I say only for a reason) my own opinion. |