Awe. I really liked your poem, sweetie. I kinda felt the same over my holidays. I really liked lines 1 & 5.. I found them very original.
-xx-

Some parts didnt really make sense to me...but otherwise good job!

This is what i was talking about a [poem
with emotion hurtful yet still real. Its hard
to tell someone you love thier poem even
through it was painful to them. you know
what i mean? good read another 5