Uuh 5\5. nice job. i like the line"I cut myself one more time,
without regret or of what people think
All i want to do is create a new pain " i understand that, it flows nicely i think and i can feel what you mean in this. great job!

I love this!! the way you talk about control. i knew someone who cut themselves, but they did it because it was the one thing they could control!! 5/5