She Laughed the Loudest, Who'd of Known?

by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи   Jan 3, 2008


I wrote this a long time ago... So some of you may have already read it, vote's/comments appreciated!=)

An ordinary girl
Or so it seems
A beautiful smile
Full of dreams
Convincing laughter
Hurt untold
Through her words
Appears so bold
Many friends
A normal life
But no one knows
About her knife
Her grades in school
Prove her smart
A loving person
A wonderful heart
Yet scarred so deeply
Battered and bruised
Secretly hurting
And so confused
Comes home each night
Tears start to fall
But soon as day breaks
There's no sign at all
Her friends they adore her
Admire her so
She never tells them
Of what they don't know
Instead she goes on
Appearing so brave
Knowing inside
These are her last days
Planning her suicide
Setting the date
An X on her calender
Sealing her fate
Not going unnoticed
Sits an empty chair
The day is more boring
Because she's not there
Attendance is taken
By all she is missed
Under "absent"
This girl makes the list
Soon it's discovered
The truth becomes clear
People are shocked
Can't believe what they hear
See things aren't always
As they are shown,
She laughed the loudest,
Who'd of known?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    The last 2 lines cannot be more true.
    she laughed the hardest who would have known
    how everything amounted to that was an incredible way to describe the life of that girl i dont know who she is but let it be known shes not the only one shes not alone

    xHSx

  • 16 years ago

    by jessica warrick

    This is by far the best one i read. but i aint been all through em yet. but so far the ones i read are all good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    I have been reading your poems ALL night and let me tell you this is my favorite i am so VERY blown away by your poems its like so unreal how good you are ! i mean jeeze every single poem one after another greater than last!! how do you do it!!!

    Noelle Wright

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Ballerina

    Wow very good poem i just fell in love with it lol i absolutely adore the whole thing... mostly the story line....just beautiful. it had great flow... and i really love the ending.... thanks for the great read....10/10 u deserve it... :D

    ~Love Always Little Black Princess~

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    An amazing poem [as always]
    i absolutely love everything about this poem.
    the structure and the format. the flow
    and the wording. and the story line as well.

    "Planning her suicide
    Setting the date
    An X on her calender
    Sealing her fate"

    these were my favorite lines.

    yet another outstanding poem. :] 5/5.

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