Wow.. I must say, this would make an incrediable song! I had to read it twice just so I could sing along to it the second time around. Your choice of words, amazing, the flow, flawless. You did such a great job! I can see why you're a popular poet. Don't stop writing and I hope to hear this lyrics and others of yours on the radio someday. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

I really liked this one too. It'd be cool to hear some of your songs with the music. Keep up the wonderful poems and songs! :]]

Meg<3