First Time

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Jan 3, 2008


The first time I laid eyes on you,
There was something inside of you
You looked at me like no one different,
And I knew you wanted to talk.

The first time I talked to you,
You had that sweet little boy's voice.
We became the best of friends,
And we became inseparable.

The first time you laid a kiss on my lips,
Was the most amazing feeling I got.
My stomach began getting butterflies,
And my heart began to ache for your love.

The first time you held my hand,
I knew this was real love.
You held me like no one had ever done before,
That is why I feel protected with you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Nice job... i think that you could have made this a big deeper with stronger emotions but still it was an enjoyable read

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I love the 3rd and 4th stanzas its kinda sweet and sincerely expressed the emotions very well. perfectly ended very great 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Great poem.
    cute and sweet and again, beautiful.
    i really like it.
    especially the ending. :] 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Aww puppy love. lol. i miss back in the day when that feeling was new to me. good poem. i like it.