by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA Jan 3, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
first love
The first time I laid eyes on you, |
Nice job... i think that you could have made this a big deeper with stronger emotions but still it was an enjoyable read |
by Sweet lig
I love the 3rd and 4th stanzas its kinda sweet and sincerely expressed the emotions very well. perfectly ended very great 5/5 |
Great poem. |
by Anonymous
Aww puppy love. lol. i miss back in the day when that feeling was new to me. good poem. i like it. |