by jason Jan 3, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
No place to go,no place to hide |
Uuh ok. i give you a 4\5. it is good but word of advice.s eperate the lines just few paragraphs and it will make iit more easy to read. uuh it flows pretty well i think. very detailed. and i am all for detail gives an image, uuh but i think it could use just a lil bit of work, but i do like it. |