Whats the point inliving?

by Just Jessy   Jan 3, 2008


My eyes are blacking over,
My wrists are crying red,
The world is spinning around me,
Soon i will be dead.

Nothing left to live for,
Nothing left to gain,
So I'll leave behind this emptiness,
This hurt, sorrow and pain.

What the point in living,
When were living just to die?
Cant ever be happy,
When all i do is cry.

Being dead is better for me,
I'm already dead inside,
Just waiting for my body to go,
Then i don't have to hide.

My life is so empty,
The same as my heart,
Whats the point in living,
When I'm torn apart?

I'm in love with you,
So why don't you care?
I'm willing to give you my heart,
Your not even willing to share.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Its Jessiika Baybee

    I realli like your poems,, veri original,,,,

  • 15 years ago

    by Its Jessiika Baybee

    I realli like your poems,, veri original,,,,

  • 15 years ago

    by jennifer leigh

    I know exactly how this feels.
    This brought tears to my eyes because I can releate so much. It made me feel as if I was back in that frame of mind. I dont know if this is just a poem or if there is something behind it, but it will all get better.

    Keep up the amazing work. I hope to continue reading more from you.

    x

  • 16 years ago

    by tears in heaven

    WOW. oh my gosh. that poem put tears in my eyes that was from the heart i could feel it. i think you keep things inside and are afraid to show them

  • 16 years ago

    by FaithHopeNLove

    Im tingly all over from reading your poem. Thats exactly how I felt two years ago. Every line, every word. It speaks a truth for the pain that every one endures. A wise friend once told me, "the man who kills himself in dismay is nothing but a coward. The man that faces and overcomes his hardships is brave. But humans do as humans are and we all have our flaws. Just think about it more than twice before you dig your grave." Ur poem has so much raw emotion. I hope your life takes a better turn soon. But its a great poem and I'm sure everyone can relate to it. Your a very talented writer, so keep writting and good luck.