by Just Jessy Jan 3, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
My eyes are blacking over, |
I realli like your poems,, veri original,,,, |
I realli like your poems,, veri original,,,, |
I know exactly how this feels. |
WOW. oh my gosh. that poem put tears in my eyes that was from the heart i could feel it. i think you keep things inside and are afraid to show them |
Im tingly all over from reading your poem. Thats exactly how I felt two years ago. Every line, every word. It speaks a truth for the pain that every one endures. A wise friend once told me, "the man who kills himself in dismay is nothing but a coward. The man that faces and overcomes his hardships is brave. But humans do as humans are and we all have our flaws. Just think about it more than twice before you dig your grave." Ur poem has so much raw emotion. I hope your life takes a better turn soon. But its a great poem and I'm sure everyone can relate to it. Your a very talented writer, so keep writting and good luck. |