I flippin love this poem!!! check out mine leave a comment....be brutal i wanna know da truth |
I love this poem. It's amazing. I give you 5/5. I'd go higher if I could. Keep writing, and please check out my poetry. Nothing as good as yours, of course, but still. Keep it up. |
by Maria
I love this poem <3 it's like you have put my thoughts on paper .. |
by Marie
Wow. its beautiful. it gave me chills. but i guess thats just cause i can relate to it. good job. |
Im tingly all over from reading your poem. Thats exactly how I felt two years ago. Every line, every word. It speaks a truth for the pain that every one endures. A wise friend once told me, "the man who kills himself in dismay is nothing but a coward. The man that faces and overcomes his hardships is brave. But humans do as humans are and we all have our flaws. Just think about it more than twice before you dig your grave." Ur poem has so much raw emotion. I hope your life takes a better turn soon. But its a great poem and I'm sure everyone can relate to it. Your a very talented writer, so keep writting and good luck. |
WOW. oh my gosh. that poem put tears in my eyes that was from the heart i could feel it. i think you keep things inside and are afraid to show them |
I know exactly how this feels. |
I realli like your poems,, veri original,,,, |
I realli like your poems,, veri original,,,, |