I love it. It really portrays your feelings and whats going on in your mind.

Powerful poem..
You write really well..

I'm done with your fu'cking drama.
I'm done wasting my time on you.

^ ^ ^
5/5.. Wow!
xxx

So honest. I love it.
its actually kind of nice to know that there ARE girls out there they know they deserve to be respected.
props dude. (5/5)

Hard, but i feel the true in this poem!
Great!

Fukin hell wow you tell him!! its so gr8 2 now people stand up 4 them selfs lol gr8 jos awsum poem babe

stacey xoxoxoxoxoxoxox

OMG! This poem is amazing. I feel so deeply connected to it. you have amazing talent. In the navy and a poet, neveer heard that one before. lol thats really cool.

So now watch me walk away,
Count the steps that you see me take.
Cuz I'm walking out of your life dear friend,
I'll no longer be your mistake.

^^^ this is my favorite stanza. plz keep writing. this flow was perfect. 5/5
kat

Wow, passion is in this poem, even if it is explicit. lol. it is true feeling and that is all that maters. 5/5

You go girl!!!! i love it, i know exactly what it feels like when a guy chooses his pride over you and then on top of it doesn't think about how it would hurt you. you did such a great job of capturing the emotions of pain hurt anger and disappointment. think you spoke on behalf of all of us who have been hurt badly by someone we love, you keep it up girl and know you deserve so much more and will find way more in life, he sounds like an idiot who didn't deserve you and he will soon realize that. 5/5