by Jenni Marie Jan 3, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Flash that smile honey, don't act so coy |
by Not Enough
HAHahaha! Awesome! The last line is great... Sadly I don't have much critisism for this one. It's great! She sounds like a very nice person! lol... |
I enjoyed this it made me laugh at the ending |
I reallyy loved that poem! Its AMAZING! Your right.. all people ever care about is the outer beauty.. no one really cares to look a little harder and try to find the real beauty in people.. |
by Illusion
Great work. |
by Vanessa Bell
THAT WAS A WONDERFUL POEM...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! |