by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight Jan 3, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The day was so beautiful, but I can only see the gray, that is hiding, in the background of all the happiness. You hold me in your arms tight, and i start praying that you will never let go. |
by expressivechild
This is simple awesome! Keep it up... |
This poem is so deep and powerful it can draw a clear picture in my head...i've felt my eyes moisten n my skin get goosebumps after i read this poem...its a masterpiece...extremely well written...dont have enough words to decribe it...! keep it up ! great great work ! infact all this is a understatement, your work needs to be appreciated much more ! |
by Wereallbladesarntwe
What a sad but lovely write, well done thank you for sharing this, xp |
by Brittiny
I love your poems so much emotion in them. keep writing and ill keep reading. well i say 5/5 great jobs keep going hope your life gets a shot of good luck. |
by Cindy
This is a very sad and heartfelt write. I hope things get better for you. Writing feelings down always help. |