by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere Jan 3, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Soul Thing |
by Dan
Good poem but the flow is kinda messed up. 5/5 |
by HidinVictim
This is cute, but it doesn't flow very well, maybe try a different form... 4/5 |
by Mr Rhee
The sadness comes out and drains you. You brought out everything with this. Very good writing. |
Another great poem. |