Comments : Tell Me You're Sorry With A Straight Face

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Great job. everything goes well together nice job. 5\5.

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    That was simply a beautiful poem.
    the title itself deserved a 5/5!
    the flow was flawless and i loved your word choice.
    i know what it's like. it happens to me alot.
    it gets tiresome, so i give up. ."/

    anyway. great write. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Hey there. Happy New Year. Looks like I have a lot of catching up to do.

    Great poem. I always look forward to your poems because you have an amazing expressive style.
    Now to read more.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kenny

    Simply amazing, I enjoyed reading it till the end. . just Great! great job, as usual. . keep it up. .

  • 16 years ago

    by Riley

    Nicely done,
    I could've cared for better rhyming words but the emotion and tone was there.

    Pretty good I'd say...

    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Simply Me

    Very good i really enjoyed this read. the emotions are so real and so strong 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by musiqlover015

    I love it

  • 16 years ago

    by fakesmile

    That is seriously one sweet poem... 5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Wow; This is amazing...
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    ...Maybe shorten the title a little? (If its for a comp.)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Seems every single day you're apologizing
    Yet I'm still dubious about your words
    For you can't even look me in the eyes
    And enjoy it immensely when I hurt
    ^^^
    This stanza shouts pain. And you are so correct .... apologizing with indirect eye contact just makes one want to yell at the top of their lungs .... LIAR!!! And you have expressed that word in this stanza so well.

    Can't you show any compassion
    Instead of only anger and distaste
    Prove that once you did care for me
    Apologize to me with a straight face
    ^^^
    Gosh how I can so relate to this stanza ... when all we are looking for is a sincere apology ... an apology with a snickered face is like ... a knife carving into our heart.

    I really like this read ... you paint a sad yet colorful picture.
    I find the title to be a little long and gives away much about the poems content before reading it ... but if it is for a contest then that can't be helped I guess ... lol

    Well done hun, looking forward to reading more
    Luanne