by ShawdowDancer Jan 3, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
Every part of me wanted to cry |
Wow this poem was powerful. I can tell you put a lot of emotion into it. You have talent. keep writing and caheck out some of my work if you'ld like. 5/5 |
You should make this a love poem it is good |
Thanks so much |
This is really good I love da emotion in it! But the way u felt the emotion is the ONLY bad part! |