An Abuse Story

by HidinVictim   Jan 3, 2008


He puts her on a pedestal
And then he knocks her down
A tear stained face
And steel toed boots her only grace
He pulls her to her feet
And makes her say
She loves him and his taste
Kicks her to the floor
Crimson tears and body fluid her lord
He walks out the door
She can take this no more
He returns in the morn-n
With a caress of his cheek
His flesh and, her blade meet.

I don't really know where to put this so please give me ideas. This poem was inspired by a book I'm reading And On The Eighth Day She Rested.

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  • 16 years ago

    by My Mistakes

    Excellent. i like how it tells a story of a woman standing up for herself. great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    That was a powerful poem! Your choice of words as always was outstanding, you painted a clear picture... movie in my head. It flowed perfectly, and held so much emotion! Keep up the amazing work!

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Another amazing write. the flow, again, was flawless. and the imagery you created was amazing as well. and the emotion was captured very well. a powerful piece this one. and another great write. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Another great poem. I loved the image from this and the flow was great. They fit just perfect. Great job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    I am glad to hear this is not true in your life...but the poem was very good and the wording was brilliant....i could see the whole thing before my eyes

    5/5

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