Comments : An Abuse Story

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    I am glad to hear this is not true in your life...but the poem was very good and the wording was brilliant....i could see the whole thing before my eyes

    5/5

  • Another great poem. I loved the image from this and the flow was great. They fit just perfect. Great job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Another amazing write. the flow, again, was flawless. and the imagery you created was amazing as well. and the emotion was captured very well. a powerful piece this one. and another great write. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    That was a powerful poem! Your choice of words as always was outstanding, you painted a clear picture... movie in my head. It flowed perfectly, and held so much emotion! Keep up the amazing work!

  • 16 years ago

    by My Mistakes

    Excellent. i like how it tells a story of a woman standing up for herself. great job 5/5