The giant and the tea party

by Madison   Jan 3, 2008


Sitting neath a willow tree
i looked upon the place id set
waiting with my finest china
for the guest id called to tea
then there came a building rumble moving twords the
place i sat
immense was all that came to mind for he would shirley never fit
i tried to hand him a cup of earl
but fingers like bricks weren't meant for that
i tried to help him with his saucer but hands like boulders weren't made for this
and now i sit a lonely boy
waiting for my guest to leave
all i have is broken china
only this and shattered dreams

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is unique and quite interesting. It is a little rough at times, but over all it is amazing. Excellent job.

  • 16 years ago

    by HiddenPoet

    Wow, this poem is original.

    This seems like it would take place in garden in England.

    The image of a stone man seems to be like a object that the boy disregarded at first, but when it came to him he had to deal with it, like a hardened memory.

    All in all, I enjoyed reading it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Its a little oddly written but the symbolism takes away from that so i think its brilliant 5* : )

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  • 16 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    A very sad, and surreal poem.
    the imagery is brill.
    it reminds me of the stone man from the neverending story.
    a short poem, but effective.
    excellent.
    Kat xxx

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