A very sad, and surreal poem.
the imagery is brill.
it reminds me of the stone man from the neverending story.
a short poem, but effective.
excellent.
Kat xxx

Its a little oddly written but the symbolism takes away from that so i think its brilliant 5* : )

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Wow, this poem is original.

This seems like it would take place in garden in England.

The image of a stone man seems to be like a object that the boy disregarded at first, but when it came to him he had to deal with it, like a hardened memory.

All in all, I enjoyed reading it.

This is unique and quite interesting. It is a little rough at times, but over all it is amazing. Excellent job.