by Alexandra Jade Brewer Jan 3, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
She just stared |
by Sweet lig
I really felt the sadness.. seems really depress and emotional thoughts.. it really flowed well and awesome 5/5 |
by Blissful
Wow this was just so dark and haunting. The emotions you expressed were deep and ones I could find myself relating with. The last stanza was the perfect way to end the poem. It all flowed nicely and overall it was a great write. Well done *5/5* |