Comments : Depressed Vision

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow this was just so dark and haunting. The emotions you expressed were deep and ones I could find myself relating with. The last stanza was the perfect way to end the poem. It all flowed nicely and overall it was a great write. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I really felt the sadness.. seems really depress and emotional thoughts.. it really flowed well and awesome 5/5