Enveloping Darkness

by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop   Jan 3, 2008


I am lost in the darkness,
Stuck in confusion,
Lost in a land,
Full of Illusion,

I feel like I'm blind,
I see nothing but black,
There is no one around,
To be at my back.

The darkness around,
Has a vampiric embrace,
It's cold to the touch,
It's numbing my face.

My soul now feels nothing,
Like I have been hexed,
This loneliness I feel,
Leaves me quite vexed.

This darkness I'm in,
Is taking it's toll,
Can anyone save me,
Before I loose my soul?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow.
    That's amazing.
    I use amazing and flawless too much in your comments.
    I need to come up with a new word, just for you. xD

    Seriously, though. It is amazing and flawless.
    Perfection in words. xD

    (Minus the sad part . . . lol)

  • 16 years ago

    by Diabolic Atrocity

    Hey now! You know I'll always be there for you, so don't EVEN try to say you have no one at your back ~_^