Mmm always knew how to paint a picture for the ever vigilant reader..

"I'm done with the pain and I'm done with the hurt
I'm done with being treated lower than dirt
I'm finished with the misery and fed up with the agony
I'm ending this life now, and none of you can stop me."

i honestly hope you haven't finished with writing..

kiddo you are BRILLIANT

[holy crappola, when you were DRUNK?!]

Drunk or not, that was great.

"I'm done with the pain and I'm done with the hurt
I'm done with being treated lower than dirt
I'm finished with the misery and fed up with the agony
I'm ending this life now, and none of you can stop me."

These lines hit me the most, but I hope you're not thinking of suicide or something cause that's what it sounds like to me, no offense.

I really like this poem. the last stanza was amazing, but the rest of the poem was too. i love how you can rhyme even when you are drunk. haha.

Trippy.
wowee.
this is amazing.
and you wrote this on my birthday.
haha.
posted it, anyways.

your poetry = amazizing

Wow, that's would be good even if you weren't drunk. your amazing