Comments : Illusioned Reality

  • 16 years ago

    by Kenny

    Relation~ The only word that comes to mind...

    You should read my poem "Screaming Silence"

    K~

  • 16 years ago

    by TAYLOR

    Wow this poem is amazing :)
    love it

  • 16 years ago

    by steve

    God that was good, it made me shiver, sounds like a scary nightmare and it flowed perfect very smooth5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by chikidiwa

    I like it ...

  • 16 years ago

    by hopefulsmile

    It's another great work i really like it.
    i like the title very much, just the title has a deep meaning. really it's touch me soo deep .
    add u to my favorite auther coz really u deserve. keep on the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Blah Blah Blahhhh

    I like this one your good

  • 16 years ago

    by slynn

    One-you can rhyme (and you know i can't)
    two- you've told me how this is really you
    three- i won't walk anywhere but right back when you need me

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Wow. I really liked it! It was really good. The flow was pretty much flawless. You felt like you were actually in the poem. Very emotional and relateable! Great job!!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by PoEtiCmYme

    Simply amazin

  • 16 years ago

    by Heather

    This is an amazing poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Wow this is another great poem i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by hopefulsmile

    It's an amazing poem. i love it
    all ur poems are excellent, u r really talented. keep on . 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by hopefulsmile

    Every time i read it i like it more :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Littlewriter-a

    Amazing poem. I loved it. It reminds me of some of mine but you used your expression so well. Very good :D
    Arielle
    ~Heart Beat Thunder~