Comments : His Heart is the Sea

  • 16 years ago

    by Laloser05

    Wow.

    Just...

    Wow
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Armada the Gestalt

    Thankyou. I wouldn't call it a wow but I like it.

    My friends are training me to be less modest. Please excuse if I seem cocky.

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    I would say this is defintely a wow poem. Awesome job. Defintely saddening, but beautiful all at the same time

    Ahh, I totally understand what you mean about using the right words!! I also love the power to mold words and scenes to fit my whims and ideas.

    xDD Those are two pretty different things, but in the end, I agree, the resulting mix is pretty sweet!!

    Much Love
    .:Danielle:.

  • 16 years ago

    by adroit

    Mysterious and yet perfectly clear.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cupids Got A Gun

    Wow, I'm kinda amazed by this poem. Your wording is great and unique I love it and it fits together really well! yr very talented! 5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Janna Antal

    Very refreshing!! I loved it!