I like this a lot. It starts out slow and smooth and as you talk about the beginnings of what I believe is your obession and the more and more you get into the anger the more angry and short your words become and louder speak your actions. However your word usage is wonderful, different words used in an almost dark, playful manner. And your descriptions are wonderful!! This is a really good poem. 5/5 from me.

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.