Now this poem was absolutely amazing. The imagery and the flow fit just perfect. the word usage is great. Great job!

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This poem isn't that bad...the message is great! You have a lot of talent don't worry to much about not liking it. It sort of reminds me of the quote don't leave the one you love for the one you like because the one you like will leave you for the one you love. Over all this was a great poem, it was clear with a good choice of words, and I think it would make a great song!
Only thing in this sentence I think you mean 'were' instead of where:
Where just friends