Quite well written , good rhytm in the second stanza, the third one and the last sentence stopped the flow a bit ,
overal a good poem
keep it up :)

I agree - very well written..I have to say that I really like your poem. I think that the nature section of this site has to be where one can find really wonderfully written poems. They arent old and dull like so may other love poems. Im sure mine fall into that category once in awhile. I found your work very interesting. Keep up the good words and may all your writings bring you peace.

Thank you both for your wonderful comments, I really appreciate your feedback. I am so glad that you liked this poem. Also, I can't thank Terminal choice enough for his helpful, well-balanced critiques. I found them very helpful and I will definitely keep your advice in mind when I write something that I will submit here.