Now I lay me down alone

by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop   Jan 4, 2008


Now I lay me,
Down alone,
No one is calling,
On my telephone.

If I die,
Before I wake,
No one to care,
If my life, I take.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Well, I'm sure you know it's short so I won't state that part. xD

    You did a great job with this. It's very sad, eh. And, I know there are tons of people who care about you. . . But, it's not like you'd really do it anyway. :]

    But, the actual poem.
    Was great, flawless.
    Great emotion,
    everything was just great.

    :]

    Keep it up darling.

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Short, simple, and to the point
    5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Diabolic Atrocity

    I know for a fact there are people who would care if you took your life, I can name a few off the top of my head, me being one of them

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