by reJoyce Jan 4, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
Today I noticed a change in you |
I really liked this poem. it was pretty sweet. perhaps because it came from one of my best friends written about my best friend. haha but i thought it was really good. |
I see no problems in this piece and I think you are ready to give it to your friend ;) |
by Dawnie
That speaks to me. i like it. |
by Void
Alright. Well the friend in me, really wants you to keep it as is, because nothing is better than words that are unpolished and directly from the heart. |
by SpEcIaLmE
Thats really good i luv the emotion and it flows really well |