Good job just a few spelling questions....

Iv lost all hope (I've)

and

this fear of you not loveing me (loving)

Just trying to help 5/5 though :)

Pretty good! it was short but it was long enough to understand all the message.
5/5

Pretty good. deep, meaningful and emotional.
Taegan Emily xxx

Pretty good. deep, meaningful and emotional.
Taegan Emily xxx

Aw, short but full of emotion.
It showed so much images.
Great job!
5/5

.:CiNdY:.