Your melody burnt holes in ears so soothingly, and now the silence deafens
- This was my favourite line.

I really enjoyed this poem. it is beautifully written and very emotional.

xx
Taegan Emily

You know, I'm really loving this new style you've had going for you lately. It's almost as if you get inspired from Ians work and the create your own gem of work. It's quite beautiful to tell you the truth. The emotions ran wild throughout this. I loved the touch of sarcasm you added also, you really have it in you. This was a deep piece, It play my heart strings like a violin. Really sad, touching and breath taking. Though like I said, has a touch of that sarcasm. I feel like you grasped onto my heart and really had it gripped within a sorrowing tune. Again i've been left in shock by another amazing write by you. Your word choice is a mixture of simple and sweet, and deep and vivid. I loved that about this poem. I can't pick out a favorite of this piece for all parts are stunning. You've created a diamond here which is going on my favorite poems. A beautifully sad, yet elegant write. 5/5 from me definitly. Though you deserve way more for this. You've got talent sweets.

Great poem.
it's long but it keeps people interested.
good work.
tc

This is interesting and filled with excellently expressed emotions. Very intense from the beginning to the end. I like the imagery that you created, it is original and powerful. Whole poem is different from anything I've read before, it's not typical clishe love poetry which is great.
Descriptions flow through the mind, creating effective, unique images.
The second stanza is my favorite.
Keep writing!

OoOoO..
wonderful phrases that got me hooked
I couldn't stop reading this poem
It had my attention throughout the whole piece
The message you sent was amazing and
I think a lot of people in general can relate to it
vocab was great and nothing was forced
flow was right on
I was very impressed with this piece
5/5
kaila