Wow. Just wow. I'm totally amazed. I really get an almost haunted feeling from this one. Awesome write for sure :) I know that the use of a repeated verse usually takes great amount of care and balancing and too often ruins the poem (a.k.a my The Night Is Silent poem. I wouldn't recommend that one xDD) and too little it almost isn't caught, but you did an awesome job with the repeated verse through this one. I really like the rhyme through out it and the ending line is a twist. :) :)

Wordsmiths are some of the most powerful people :) Without words we're all lost

Your Welcome. Wow, that is really quite awesome, when I write characters, it takes me awhile to figure out how I want them to be. :) That's a pretty sweet talent. Ha-ha.

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.