HEART and SOUL

by Sweet lig   Jan 4, 2008


Title: HEART AND SOUL
AUTHOR: SWEET Lig

HEART AND SOUL

I wish were meant to be
That our love is forever
Cause you're always
In my HEART and SOUL

I wish you were here with me
From tonight until the end of time
And I know you're always
In my HEART and SOUL

I wish you could hear me
From here miles away
Saying that you're always
In my HEART and SOUL

Wish were meant to be
You're here with me
And hear me
With all your HEART and SOUL...

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  • 16 years ago

    by reJoyce

    Hey i liked the repetition of HEART AND SOUL. the title is what interested me in reading. it was very sincere and well done with no rhymes. i want to right like that. i hope all is well with you and this person.

  • 16 years ago

    by reJoyce

    Hey i liked the repetition of HEART AND SOUL. the title is what interested me in reading. it was very sincere and well done with no rhymes. i want to right like that. i hope all is well with you and this person.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    HEART and SOUL...????
    what's about Body...???
    anyway, nice poem... keep up this good work :D

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Thsi poem was a lot better.
    The sylables mathced a lot closer which
    made if flow. Well done.
    Thank you for the comment on my poem.
    <3Tay 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought this was a great poem, the overall concept was really great. THe flow was good pretty much through out, and the repition also worked very well. Alotgether a great poem, a well deserved 5/5

    Stephanie Naylor

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