Short, yet absolutely sweet...
i wonder... shouldn't everyone listen to their hearts and souls?
this poem made me think a little about it...
it is surely a wonderfully written love poem...
*keep going*
isabel

I like this! Its really cute. It was simple and yet had alot of meaning. You expressed your feelings really well!

This was cute and sweet. I do think it was a bit too simple and there was quite a lot of repitition which threw the flow off for me. I like the meaning behind it and how it was easy to relate with. *4/5*

A very sweet poem. i can relate. :]
you captured the emotion very well.
the flow was kinda off, but still.
a great poem nonetheless. :] 5/5.

Aw, this is such a nice poem. It's filled with so much emotion and the imagery was great. Good job!

.:CiNdY:.

Love it....made me think of my bf again. good job great flow (even tho it didnt rhyme) and you got you point acroos beautifully

So pretty, i have nothing else to say... you are such a talent... 5/5

You really punch the "heart and soul" part into your readers and that helps to prove the point of the poem. It seems to be well written and was easy to relate too. 5/5

I liked it heaps. My favorite part was that you said "my heart and soul"
then changed it to
"your heart and soul"
Taegan Emily
xx

I really liked this. And, I almost hate to say it seemed to lack a bit of emotion, I think because it was short. Maybe the lines or the entire poem itself could have been longer?

Anyway, it's still a good job.
Keep it up
5/5

A very sweet poem of love and feelings i wish i could write something like this myself great job and thanks fro shareing

My only comment is to change the first line to
"i wish we were meant to be"

5/5

This is only a good poem... it's too short and simple.. i know a lot of people could relate to this but i can't really feel the emotions you're trying to uplift... it's still a good poem =]

My suggestion would be to make the first line in the first and last stanza to:

Wish we were meant to be
instead of:

"Wish were meant to be"

Other than that I liked this poem. I like the repition and I think it's a sweet poem. <3

I love the concept of the poems. But the repetition did get a little boring... Overall it was a good poem.

I thought this was a great poem, the overall concept was really great. THe flow was good pretty much through out, and the repition also worked very well. Alotgether a great poem, a well deserved 5/5

Stephanie Naylor

Thsi poem was a lot better.
The sylables mathced a lot closer which
made if flow. Well done.
Thank you for the comment on my poem.
<3Tay 5/5

HEART and SOUL...????
what's about Body...???
anyway, nice poem... keep up this good work :D

Hey i liked the repetition of HEART AND SOUL. the title is what interested me in reading. it was very sincere and well done with no rhymes. i want to right like that. i hope all is well with you and this person.

Hey i liked the repetition of HEART AND SOUL. the title is what interested me in reading. it was very sincere and well done with no rhymes. i want to right like that. i hope all is well with you and this person.