Somehow

Hahah 23, it is everywhere for me so I had to make it 24 commets ahah

Well anyways yet again another awesome poem!! You just have that writing style that throws a punch right at the heart OR a slap across the face O-o this poem has a message to the broken hearted!!!!!!!! That everything AND I mean EVERYTHING will be alright...I am and have been going through all kinds of shit and this broght me to remember things will be alright you just half to keep going on believing!!!

Just keep up the amazing work!!!

I am getting sucked INTO your work aahhaha. So i might take it as a storybook, i picked yours and I am going to continue to read them =D So YOU are going to be on my favorite list missy =D

Much LOVE FOR CHUIE!!!!

/////CourtneyxHolland/////

5/5

Short and sweet...

I didnt really like this one.. i get the message of the poem but i dont think you did a good job explaining it..it might be better if it was longer..but i dont know..its still an okay poem though.

I like the little message through but
sometimes hearing the same word over
and over again kinda throughs the poem
off. I will let that slide but 5/5
<3tay

I thought it was an ok poem, it wasnt the best, it was short, and really no depth to it, i am sorry if i seem like i am being mean, its just i know you could write alot better, i am going to have to give this one a 4/5

Stephanie Naylor