It's a great poem...
the way you always repeat "somehow" seems curiously funny...
i like the deepness of it, though...it's just so hopeful...
great work :)
*keep up*
isabel

I love this poem. Its so simple, and so true! Well done!

Nice poem. short and simple, but deep.
comical. i like it. :] 5/5.

Pretty good poem. Kind of short, and not much emotion. It's pretty good though.

.:CiNdY:.

Hey. Thank you for your comment. you asked me to comment on your newest one, and according to the site, this is it. I did like it, but I think you may want to put 'curse' to 'cursed' because it sounds like it is suppose to be past tense.
How come you put it under Funny poems?
Just wondering.
Good job with so little words though. :)

Really short but very good. i liked it. unsure of the meaning somehow, buit made me think of my bf....anyways good poem 5/5

Oh i love this, short sweet and to the point comes to mind, very well written, and you take us right there, i love it... 5/5

I like it a lot. You said so much with just one stanza which is excellent. Emotions are expressed greatly. I can relate to this piece.
Straight to the point, powerful and very effective.

Sometimes simplicity works better, like here...

thnks for commenting me btw :)

A poem is saying the most, whilst using the least. ^__^ and this poem nailed it somehow.. hehe 5/5!

Wow, it's extremely short but amazing. :]
I liked the ending, and the meaning to it.

I loved how you repeated " somehow " instead of just throwing it in at the end, as well. xD

keep it up
5/5

Again great writeing thanks for shareing your work with everyone i really enjoy it

Somehow, it will get better, you just have to figure out what it is. and i hope you do!
5/5

I thought this was very intense and held a lot of emotion and depth to say it was a relatively short piece.

The repetition of "somehow" worked well to start with, but towards the end I felt like it was becoming to much. maybe eliminate one or two of the "somehow's?"

I think that would also im prove the flow a little bit as well.

Saying that, I thought this was a beautiful piece and I loved the feeling of hope throughout, that made for a powerful affect.

Even though this is short it is still very to the point and presents the message clearly. Sometimes the shortest ones have the most meaning. I loved this one. 5/5

For as short as this was, it was a nice poem. And I'm glad I've gotten the chance to read it. Somehow your repetition of "somehow" made this poem cute... Somehow... :P 5/5

I like how you ended this poem, very effective, when someone usually use a same word more than once in a poem that leave a bad impression on me, still your repetition of -somehow- is great and it helped you to create very unique rhythm which kept my attention.
Very nice piece, well done!

I thought it was an ok poem, it wasnt the best, it was short, and really no depth to it, i am sorry if i seem like i am being mean, its just i know you could write alot better, i am going to have to give this one a 4/5

Stephanie Naylor

I like the little message through but
sometimes hearing the same word over
and over again kinda throughs the poem
off. I will let that slide but 5/5
<3tay

I didnt really like this one.. i get the message of the poem but i dont think you did a good job explaining it..it might be better if it was longer..but i dont know..its still an okay poem though.