Wow. It's like a depressing version of Pinoccio (I totally butchered that. Oh well. :O) But it flows so smoothly and I think it goes deeper than the child's tale. How some of the most beautiful people are really just sad on the inside, no matter how perfect they seem, there is always something hidden. Amazing write

I have to say I agree it wasn't one of my better ones. I liked the idea of it, but the poem didn't quite turn out like I wanted it. lol. I'll tweak it a little :)

We'll rule the world one day. ^_^

Now lets see you become your characters, that'll be interesting. :-P

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.