Comments : Forever Apart

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    Absolutely beautiful. Please keep them coming. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Aww its so sad that you will never meet!! beautiful!! :):)

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Great with the back and forth of the poem
    keep it up
    great!!!
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    Really really good poem :)!
    very well written with a great use of words.
    Keep it up!
    5/5 :)

  • 15 years ago

    by love09 4ever

    Nice poem!!!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Shane Farrell

    Thank you all..

    To those who have said keep it up I have to offer an apology. The words in that writing came from a place I didn't know existed and I am no writer. I really have no idea if I'll ever be able to tap that source again.

    One day maybe but not just now.