I like this poem. Imagery is fantastic and your word choice is excellent too. I don't like rhyming poems too much because they usually have so typical rhymes but yours are very creative and original. Idea for whole poem is quite impressing and unique.
You managed to create very captivating and exciting atmosphere trough the piece which leaves amazing impression. I love your descriptions and I will surly read more of your work.
Well done, this is truly greatly written!

I liked it! wats the name of ur book, i might want to read it sumtime. i liked the imagery of the poem, very awsome, thanx for commenting on my poem and i hope u have an awsome day!

Absolutely fantastic. Beautifully written, your words are well-crafted, and the imagery is astonishing. That was mind-blowing!

This is fantastic.
Dark and errie, and very attention grabing. This peice gave me chills. The flow was good, and the piece creative.
I think I would like your book alot.

Keep it up,
--Elly.