What am I?

by Solus   Jan 4, 2008


In the realm of life, I know I am something wrong.
Broken in more ways than one can remember.
My mind working in bizarre ebbs and flows.
Such things shouldn't move me so, stuff of make believe.
Just books and music, merely characters in picture and sound.
But my mind was forged in darkness; shadows and lies.
Evil clouded and held my soul within from youth.
Now forever haunted by dark thoughts and black visions.
And wounded by feelings I don't fully comprehend.
Nights spent alone, without love and hope.
Crying inside always at things that touch me so weirdly.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    Intense. Very deep and relatable (:

  • 13 years ago

    by marina14

    I like this one best out of all youre poems (:

  • 14 years ago

    by Infinitychanges

    I don't know why I feel I can really relate to this poem, but I do. Also I do not know whether this is written about how you feel, but I do know this:

    Now forever haunted by dark thoughts and black visions.
    And wounded by feelings I don't fully comprehend.
    Nights spent alone, without love and hope.
    Crying inside always at things that touch me so weirdly.

    You're not alone in feeling this. I feel exactly as your words explained. Great write.

  • 14 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    This comes from the soul...it's so pure and deep...very good. I really liked it =)

    --Hannah

  • 14 years ago

    by chind

    Amazing , you expressed yourself so well ... it was a powerful piece!

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