by Gasttlee
"confused, scared and alone |
I really love the title and it's brilliantly written. Love your wordage... |
by Sweet lig
Very interesting piece! the whole lines had really expressed those deep thoughts and its kinda filled of deep emotions.. there are just few lines that u have to check about the spelling i think but all over the poems still great 5/5 |
by Syndicate
Whao. That was fantastic..and truly inspiring. The flow was smooth and the message clear. You really know how to draw an audience! :D |
I can feel the emotions through the whole poem.. there is a few mis spellings, but other than that its a great poem.. i can relate to this one alot.. keep it up |