Walk with Me

by Alexandra Jade Brewer   Jan 4, 2008


Walk across the road
See a radiant smile
Know you're always safe
I'll protect you every mile

Walk across the sand
Don't worry its unsteady
But I will help you
Come to me when you're ready

Walk across the bridge
Don't worry about the shake
I will hold on tight
A new support I'll make

Walk across the water
Don't worry you wont sink
I will help you fly
With a simple kiss and wink

Walk this way with me
I will remain by your side
Holding your hand as the sun sets
Walking along beside the tide

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Eh I've seen you write better
    not saying this was bad but going from your excellent work
    to your good work is kind of a drop id say
    this poem for my taste needs more emotion or edge

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Hmmm, interesting you could be talking about a loved one, or a religious figure in this one, i love the versatility (sp), the flow is pretty amazing too... very very good... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    Nawwwww. i love it, its so simply perfect. I love that every time the place was different and i could just imagine 2 people doing this.
    AH-mazing!!!
    Taegan Emily
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    All protect you every mile [I'll*] I think that's what you meant. I'm not sure. Lol.

    This was a good one! Very beautiful, sweet, lovely imagery! I could picture it all. And it melted my heart!
    Definitely better than the first one I read.

    Good job, and keep it up, hun!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow that was so sweet! i love all the words seems really interesting and u had really great imagery 5/5

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