I just loved this! It was beautiful in it's simplicity and the meaning behind it was amazing. The flow was flawless and nothing seemed forced. Nicely done *5/5*

Wow that was so sweet! i love all the words seems really interesting and u had really great imagery 5/5

All protect you every mile [I'll*] I think that's what you meant. I'm not sure. Lol.

This was a good one! Very beautiful, sweet, lovely imagery! I could picture it all. And it melted my heart!
Definitely better than the first one I read.

Good job, and keep it up, hun!

Nawwwww. i love it, its so simply perfect. I love that every time the place was different and i could just imagine 2 people doing this.
AH-mazing!!!
Taegan Emily
xx

Hmmm, interesting you could be talking about a loved one, or a religious figure in this one, i love the versatility (sp), the flow is pretty amazing too... very very good... 5/5

Eh I've seen you write better
not saying this was bad but going from your excellent work
to your good work is kind of a drop id say
this poem for my taste needs more emotion or edge