The problem

by aislynn   Jan 4, 2008


Its only a way
to drown your sorrow
it's gonna make you realize
that you will feel worse tomorrow
unknown yet willing
you give your life for a little relaxation
until it ends up killing
and ruining your life
you do not cease
you say it gives your life
a little more ease
but when you are about to die
you will wish you could
go back and try
to stop yourself from your
wrong doings

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Mm yeah i get teh meaning of the title, but as a reader i dont liek reading 1 big paragraph poems a lot make my eyes refuse to read ,
    but this one i likke the concept and writing and flow of images from line to line it is good in those

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